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1. Naming is NOT describing.
2. Describe ONE SPECIFIC person, place, or thing.
3. Anything that is not description should not be in the body of a Descriptive Essay. But it might fit well in the Introduction or the Conclusion.
4. Location of a person or thing is irrelevant to its description. Location can change. It may, however, be relevant to the description of a place.
5. Use descriptive words and phrases (ie. like adjectives), words that describe what you observe directly
See | Hear | Smell | Feel | Taste |
few - many big - small long - short red - purple shiny - dull |
loud - soft high - low harmonious dischordant |
pleasant pungent disgusting putrid |
hard - soft smooth - rough wet - dry sticky |
sweet salty - spicy sour - bitter |
and then what you can conclude about personality and attitude.
6. Use grouping and ordering.
7. Use paragraph form. A short essay should have three to seven paragraphs. The first should be an introduction and the last one a conclusion.