http:// www3. agu. ac.jp / ~jeffreyb / write / read.html
rough machine translation ...
[ Eng=>Jpn ]
I. Check contact information and format
. . . . (then citations and references)
Is the heading in proper form: class, group, number, and name ?
Is there a title?
Is the body written in paragraphs?
Are there citations in the text?
Is there a reference section at the end?
Is there a one-page copy for each (new) reference?
Underline and check in-text citations
Is the form correct: (name, year) ?
Is there only one in-text cite for each reference?
Check references
Does every in-text cite have a reference: name (year) ...?
Does every reference have at least one in-text cite?
Do any have more than one in-text cite?
Do references have titles? Japanese in romaji [with English] ?
Does the Japanese title have spaces between the words?
Are the words capitalized except for the grammar words?
Does the URL address take you to the information used?
II. Check and analyze the text
The advisor reads the writer's paper--sentence by sentence
and asks the writer about anything that is
The advisor underlines anything that can be written
If ANY sentence seems to be okay as it is, the advisor should analyze the grammar in that sentence by
III. Discuss
The advisor and writer discuss any possible changes.
IV. Make corrections
The writer decides what changes to make and makes those changes (see proofSent.html) just like we've practiced in class and WITHOUT ERASING anything:
Do NOT rewrite the entire sentence. While making each correction,
try to write as little as possible.
If you want the teacher's opinion on any particular sentence,
write that sentence on the blackboard at the front of the room.
The teacher will then help you to think about possible corrections.
V. Evaluate
VI. Comment--suggest how to make it Better.
Rethink | Rewrite |
on topic ? complete ? |
delete irrelevant material add information |
correct information ? valid opinion ? interesting ? |
delete and / or add support or change delete and / or add |
short and concise ? | delete low quality material |
simple ? easy to understand ? well-ordered ? |
use easy vocabulary rephrase unclear sentences move or remove unconnected material |
IV. Move (in a circle)
O O . O O |
O O . O O |
O O . O O |
O O L O O |
O O M O O |
O O R O O |
O O . O O |
O O . O O |
O O . O O |